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Probably the best thing I've seen this year on Newgrounds
Holy shit the way you drew bubastis was fucking hilarious
pfffhahaha
Probably the best thing I've seen this year on Newgrounds
Holy shit the way you drew bubastis was fucking hilarious
Good shit
Your scripts may need a bit of editing, your voice acting may not be the best, and half your character designs share the same face - but this is very entertaining and fun to watch. I liked it. The pseudo-3D effects were neat, the story doesn't take itself TOO seriously and the animation is dynamic. You can tell a lot of effort went into it, which is lacking with a lot of flashes these days.
Also, the city scenes were great.
So yeah, I'd say:
- Work on your voice acting, some lines felt a little....rushed, or spoke with the wrong sort of emotive context.
-Differentiate the character designs a bit, Diggs and Link look just a bit too similar IMO. Same goes for Zelda and Impa.
-Slam in a few of the more abstract, japanese folklore style zelda stuff (the surreal mindfuck stuff in majora's mask, for example) instead of, you know, generic medieval fantasy.
you've tried hard on this so that's why i'm actually giving a constructive review, which is rare lmao. keep up the good job and keep pushing to be that little bit better with each ep.
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holy shit that was fucking brilliant. the slow mo zack snyder run was my fave bit.
girrrrlchan
The opening theme made me cry tears of joy.
The first minute and a half were hilarious
The rest kinda dragged on.
The credits made me chuckle.
I wish you'd have gone a bit deeper than dialogue and plot mocking, like fight scenes and stuff, but every time there was an intentional animation goof i laughed hard. its too bad some kids cant get the point of this flash, lookin at the lower reviews
good stuff keep it up YO
yeah lets
steal someone else's jokes and put smash bros in it! you can't go wrong
3 for effort i guess, at least the doodles were pretty cute
It's not stolen when you give credit :I
'cmon guys!
kick it up a notch! can we have some jokes that actually surprise us that we don't see coming a mile away?
i liked the visuals/animation in some bits, comick and whoever did the bit with knuckles punching sonic at the end of the act. wonchop's bit was pretty good too and i liked the idea of getting everyone to do a run cycle for the opening titles
but yeah there's nothing that sets this apart from the 645745769706765765885678 other video game parodies out there.
nicely directed.
i think your overall style needs a lot of work. it's simple but scruffy looking and comes off as kinda amateur, but there is a way to pull off this simple-but-effective vibe, so keep at it.
Other than that i liked the script, it was kinda hard to tell if this was going to be a serious thing or a comedy at first, but it's all pretty light hearted. Tomamoto sounded like someone from digimon or something lmao
Anyways nice job overall man, keep at it. you've got an interesting story here.
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