Twas alright.
Felt a bit disjointed in parts but overall a nice effort, for 5 months there's not THAT much from each author though. Much better than most 'music video collabs' where people either a) have their fancharacter miming along to the words, b) have a literal representation of the lyrics or c) having something completely random and disconnected going on.
Still, you're all pretty young and way better at flash than I was at that time lol. So stick at it